Sunday, 29 March 2015

Sunday, 22 March 2015

Swimming Backstroke

WALT: backstroke effectively

voice over or written points of: 
“Here are some tips in how to swim backstroke: 
1. pointed toes, 
straight knees, 
kicking from your bottom, 
fingers together, 
bring your arm up straight and past your ear, 
pinky finger in first. 
Head relaxed in an upward position."

How am I going?

What am I doing well?
I think I am good at keeping my arms straight.
What do I need to work on?
I need to work on kicking from my bum.


I think I did well at using my whole body to act it out.
I think I need to work on using more sound effects using my voice.

Thursday, 19 March 2015

Our trip to the Marae

I was excited I was all packed so was Dad. It was going be so fun!!! we went to the hall with our big bags,ready to get on the bus. We hopped off the bus and got welcomed by room 11 and 14. We had fun doing actiuities with our buddies, then they went home and and we got set up for sleeping...that was fun we practised our concert  then free time before dinner. We had dinner then our concert then bed time. We woke up did some stuff then bus to gorge walk . That was hard but cool . Had our lunch under the big statue. Went to lookout then we bus home.😀

Wednesday, 4 March 2015

Don't be angry

The (+ means achieved) (-means almost there) (x means I'm still trying)
WALT Entertain (Character Daddyman)

Purpose:​ To ​describe​ an interesting character so we can tell a story about
them at the Marae stay.
WALT:​ Entertain (character description)
Think of a character you could write about.* 
Draw them.  *
Introduce your character in an entertaining way. -
Describe their looks.  *
Describe their personality.  *
I think/feel statement (Conclusion / Summary) *

Criteria: I can
Self Assessment

Descriptive vocabulary (words that help to SHOW the reader)-
●use a range of verbs -
Language features (phrases that help paint a picture) *
●select one or two similes -
●use onomatopoeia to show sounds -
●select words that start with the same sound (alliteration) -
My writing is 2-3 paragraphs (100 - 200 words) *

Learning Partner Comment
Feedback: ​I love the way how you said your dad as a soft personally inside not just the angry dad in the outside 

Feedforward: Next time share more about the kind dad in the inside maybe. 
Name: Kate 
Overall, how well do you think your learning partner has done? I think she did 9 out of 10 because I wanted to hear a little more of the part of dad . 

Do not get angry with you dad. Because your dad will get so angry with you. Daddy hair is as so spikey and is as sharp as a knife. Daddy muscle are as big as a crane. His teeth are as sharp  as a knife.         Even though daddy looks might and frevce,  he is a big sofe'd inside. If you do't argry with your dad he will get you the best huge in the world. So do't get angry with your dad so you can get the best huge. I think he can do the best huge.